ok i like this story but you make harry such a fucking wimp, seriously you let everyone walk all over him and make him have to defend himself at every turn and yet he doesn't get angry? Come on now an person no matter how level headed would have went off on ron and neville sooner. The plot and the storylines are great but your characters are weak and uninteresting they have no depth you don't feel that neville is anything but a tool or that ron is an idiot, or lily is just a "constant" victim. I had actually hoped for a new update but saw none and reread the whole story and it just made me go wtf all over again. I want to like this story so much more but you just make it difficult to take anything in it remotely seriously. You are killing it with the constant harry bashing by everyone and never having harry defend himself, why is he bashed constantly yet no one points out the others flaws and seriously susan bones is a bitch in this story a person like her is not a person no person with any decent values would place one innocent life over another. I'm ranting a bit but i guess if you think this is a good way to keep writing then you need to rethink writing. Your story has become redundant, harry goes off alone, gets into a trouble, everyone shits on harry, he miracalously escapes repeat.
Author's response
I like to show my readers that the characters are evolving as the story progressed. Hopefully, you'll keep on reading my story to see if there has been transformation on my characters, or plot.