This is a good story. You may want to make a comment about Snape, since in ch.1 Albus mentioned him, and in Ch3-Nev do not know who he was.
I do love 'Harry Potter and the Betrayal of the Phoenix' so I hope you write some more .
Author's response
Crap! Good catch, I'll fix chapter one to change it to Poppy when I upload the new chapter.
Thanks
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