Well, there we go the marriage contracts are in play. Now I wonder if you are going to do a Clell and have everything conceivably horrible happen to them en route, or introduce a little levity to the mix.
The centaur thing is just bizarre, and I haven't a clue what you plan on doing with it.
To be honest, when I was writing this, she just showed up outside the tunnel opening. Don't you just love it when stories get away from you?
I hope I don't write a story that's depressing. I don't see Clell doing that either, so I'm confused. (Some may say that's my normal state.)
Thanks for the review.