Review for The Savior of the Damned

The Savior of the Damned

(#) IeroMyHero 2008-04-07

Well, god freaking damn it. I have no clue why it took two whole days for me to see that this was updated.

But, this chapter was just amazing.

I'm so glad that Frank was right about Alyssa and "The Flaw". And in this chapter, whenever she's talking to Gerard, it's so OBVIOUS that it's fake. Maybe that's cause Frank found out about her before Gerard came, but...whatever; that's beside the point. I think Gerard is getting a bit pissed off. Frank wasn't imagining the look of distaste. He couldn't have been.

Anyway, I hope things get a little more cleared up soon and we learn the reason why exactly Alyssa came back in the first place. There's gotta be some kinda evil motive behind it, right?

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Update whenever you can.

Author's response

Yeah, it's obvious to Frank since he now knows she's a fake.

They will, don't worry ;)

Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!

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