I have only read one other with Neville as the BWL - this is much better, I always suspected him of being more than ordinarily kind, and you affirm it well here.
as Cat eagle noted, the classic train confrontation is excellent.
I am looking forward to seeing how the 4 of them are able to work together to make the years more generally pleasant.
thanks for sharing after the long build up to your nanimo story. Was that every posted? if so where please??
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Thanks, glad you like it. My NaNoWriMo story hasn't been completed as of yet, I'm using this to try and break the writers block on it and several other stories. I've posted what I've written so far to the files section of my yahoo group.
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