Review for The Savior of the Damned

The Savior of the Damned

(#) asherschick 2008-04-08

+1 Hot for you and for the beautiful romance you write. Only 2 to go before the chapter turns green =)

YES YES YES hahaa! Gerard has seen the right way at last :P I'm glad you wrote this like you did, otherwise Frankie really would have seemed like the second option... Heheee, but noo! He's the one and only for Gee!

I especially loved the part where Frank placed Gerard at the other side of the room and ran away from him to talk. Hehe, that was really sweet, I smiled all the way along... And Gee going invisible slowly, telling him that Frank makes him feel that way. It must be so hard to be avoided by the very person you need attention from. It was sad, but kinda romantic, too.

Also, I adore Kat right now, really. She is the greatest xD

And I love the song, though I love all MCR songs, but Prison kinda has its own little world in my head & heart. And you're right, the lyrics fit so right in this chapter!!

So, yeah, good luck with your exams, we can wait for the next update. But school won't wait so... And can I wish myself some luck for my exams, too? =P

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Author's response

Yaaay the chapter is green! My wish came true... hahaha ;)

I'm glad you understand why i wrote it that way... no way in hell is Frankie gonna be second in line! haha

Yeah, i liked writing that part, Frank being all nervous and pushing Gee around xD

Kat is my fav girl character in this story hehe

Thanks! Good luck to you too! hehe

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