Review for The Return of the Boy Who Lived

The Return of the Boy Who Lived

(#) koppe 2008-04-09

Great start!
Original in that it's Neville who goes back with memories of an already lived life.
I must admit I look forward to see how they'll arrange any "petty murders" -- I guess Snape is a likely victim.
I'm am wondering though to which degree Neville will be able to step back and let Harry be this world's BoyWhoLived.

PS: Hope you'll update "Betrayal of the Phoenix" soon... and speaking of erotica, wouldn't mind a version of this story with that to -- perhaps were through Nevilles prodding and telling about their relationship in "his" world, Harry and Hermione gets of to an early start.

Keep up the great work!

Author's response

Thanks, glad you are enjoying it.

As for Betrayal, I do intend to update that, in fact, one of the things I'm hoping to accomplish with this story is to break through my writers block on Phoenix as well as some of my other stories.

However, I'm afraid I'll have to disappoint you in one area. This story will remain a smut free zone. I'm writing this as an exercise for me to see if i can tell a complete story where the characters stay dressed the whole time.