haha! it would suck-ith if i lived in that kind of world...meehee...
anyways, i really love where you're taking this, and i think that its quite an original plotline...well...at least i haven't seen one like it...
hey, have you read the book/series Among the Hidden? i remember reading that several years ago...and your story kind of reminds me of it...but...its so different at the same time...evil laughter fear my great descriptive skills of doom! FEAR IT! maniacal laughter yep. i know. i've lost it. well...whatever of "it" i had to begin with...:tehe: lolz
well, i'll stop my pointless ramble here...please update again, once you get the chance? no? what if i say please? STILL no? what do you want from me?!? more laughter ok...i swear i'm shutting up now...