I just wanted to let you know I read what you've written so far and really enjoy it. It's an interesting take so far. I don't think I've seen such a wise Neville before and I KNOW I've never seen him travel in time. :D
Can't wait to see where you take this next (and thanks for NOT repeating the bloody sorting song or word-for-wording the plot from the 1st book. It's nice to see stuff from Nev's point-of-view!)
Great job so far.
Thanks, I'm having a lot of fun with a confident, powerful Neville.