wow! you are a fantastic writer. everything is so detailed. i really liked how egan described being trapped in the house. i think it would be really interesting if bob, frank, mikey, and ray were introduced in the story soon. keep it up!
Author's response
Thank you so much! Thats good to know, I was afraid I was doing this thing I do where I get too caught up in the details and the reader is just sitting there like "Come on dude, pick up the pace. Make somebody have sex or pop a pill, give me somethin'...". I hate when I do that. Egan is a reflection of me in many ways (I know, how ickily cliche is that?) so when I am bored or flirty or what have you, so is she. She has a very mercurial mood, it shifts often and very quickly. So, I have been getting bored with my surroundings lately and so has she. And I have plans for the rest of the band to make appearances later on. I also think I'm going to tell things from Gerard's POV some more. I definitely have things planned for waaaaay down the line. Babies? Drug addictions? Communistic regimes? I'll leave you to guess. Once again, I wrote too much.