Great story. I really like how well you've blended the cross-over aspects and managed to keep the plot focused on Harry. I can't wait to see what will occur next. Will the Patils and Grangers visit at all over Christmas break?
Author's response
- In all honesty I spent a couple of weeks trying to write the chritmas break, and kept coming up with utter drek. So I scrapped the whole thing and jumped to April 1st...