gerard and egan's argument was hysterical to read. it reminds me of how i talk with my friends. the dialouge is really natural. i cant wait for her to meet the family. i think this was your best chapter yet!
p.s. i totally didnt get the tattoo conversation. explain. (please)
Author's response
Thanks you. I agree, I think it was my best chapter yet as well. I was typing the argument so fast I kept making mistakes and I would have to correct them and it was pissing me off, but the argument thing was very fun to write.
As for the tattoos, Frankie's got the mind of a perv. Ever heard of a thing called the 69 position? Look it up ;]