ho-lay fuh...crap! (i was SO not gonna swear there...~innocent looks~)hmm...i gotta stop crying now...me be getting weird looks...XD well you know what? the can just go shove it up their -- right. moving on. i have to say that this was a very beautiful one shot that you have written there...i'm in love with this one...i guess we're all masochists at heart. ~sardonic grin~
yeah, it did seem just a little rushed...but not to the point where its like...wait! wait! WTF? how did we get here? it was just fine. and...did not detract from my great waterworks...XD ~sniffle~
the emotion that you practically wove into the story (whoo! metaphor! hiss...its my english class coming back to haunt me...~shudder~ lolz) makes you, as the reader, feel like you were there...or were a character...it makes it so much easier to connect with the story...
on a slight 180, i love that song...have you heard the acoustic version of it? its pretty...and matt's voice can pull off both screaming and singing wonderfully...right...i'm rambling...and WAY off topic...i'll shut up now...lolz
thanks so much for your wonderful oneshot! i really love it.