Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Elfwyn 2008-04-18

Just finished reading the story and though a lot is disturbing you can see it happening in that world; so many things easy to abuse. Was disappointed that Harry still viewed Ron as a brother. Just can't see that, even if the person was my flesh and blood brother I would disown them and hate their guts. I think you, like JKR, make Harry way, way too forgiving and mild. Surely there was a nice castration curse out there? Perhaps a balding and infertility curse for Ginny. Let Harry's slytherin side out a little. Hope you have better revenge planned for AD.