Great chapter, it was nice and long and you picked a great (if somewhat irritating) stopping point. At first I was afraid that Harry would end up running straight to Dumbledore and teach at Hogwarts but this is much more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's response
Thanks for the review.
Heh, I had actually written maybe 600+ words after the end before looking back and thinking "screw this lets end it there".
Thanks also for the grammar help, which has helped me improve a lot (though I still need to fix a few things, re-reading I find that I tend to repeat a word a bunch of times in a paragraph)