Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) shysmile 2008-04-23

oh. my. god.

that was seriously intense. the way you built up to it in the entire chapter until the breaking point was really critical to the dramatic finish. personally, i think that whatever happens after that drama will make or break egan and gerards relationship.

two posts in one day too! you are a very busy chick!

it is now past my bedtime... goodnight and good job!

Author's response

I got sudden inspiration. I was so grateful that whoever is up there sent me something that I just went with it. So yes, yesterday was busy. I also went out and bought a candle that smells like icing :] I am indeed busy.

I can't say whether or no this is the pivotal moment or not, even though I made it seem that way in this last chapter. But it's certainly A pivotal moment.