oh. my. god.
that was seriously intense. the way you built up to it in the entire chapter until the breaking point was really critical to the dramatic finish. personally, i think that whatever happens after that drama will make or break egan and gerards relationship.
two posts in one day too! you are a very busy chick!
it is now past my bedtime... goodnight and good job!
Author's response
I got sudden inspiration. I was so grateful that whoever is up there sent me something that I just went with it. So yes, yesterday was busy. I also went out and bought a candle that smells like icing :] I am indeed busy.
I can't say whether or no this is the pivotal moment or not, even though I made it seem that way in this last chapter. But it's certainly A pivotal moment.