If you don't want to put the effort into writing a summary, how can you expect people to put the effort into reading it? Really, you are underestimating your readers' intelligence by thinking we'll read with that summary. Remember: "A story is only as good as its summary." Write a summary, let me know, and I promise I will read.
Author's response
thank you for my first review!
u are obviously experienced in summary writing so cud u give me some tips.
i just didnt want to ruin the story.
thank you
Xxx Nica xxX
ive changed the summary now but i still dont know if its any good. please tell me what i need to improve on
thank you
Xxx Nica xxX