(#) fujis 2008-04-25
The story held a nice tone. It gave you the up and down motion and keeps you guessing on what would be happening next.
I would have to say this would be one of the best stories I have come across in a while. It is very well written and kept the characters in the correct content, while showing an evolution of their grow or decay if certain situations had happen. You have done a very good job.