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Review for
Oaths of Fantasy
Oaths of Fantasy
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creitros
2008-04-27
I do believe shalt is the same as shall, but for the person you are speaking to (second person singular), so Harry's message is missing a "not" before touch.
Other than that, I like what you've written so far, and look forward to the next chapter.