Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) linerlover 2008-04-27

oh man i love this chapter so much.
favourite lines??? why do you have to make me choose. i say the entire chapter. although the acrobatic routine was particularly amazing. and i bet it would be immensely fun in real life.
and i liked donna telling the adults off. that made me laugh.

and damn, this whole thing is confusing. the relationships between all the characters especially.

Author's response

Why thank you! I like to think having Frank Iero chase me around a room would be awfully fun.

I'm getting alot of that. I didn't mean for it to have a confusing vibe, it makes perfect sense to me, but I'm writing it, so it would, I suppose. Um, I think I'm gonna put an A/N about that in the next chapter, because people are taking some things the wrong way, and that's no good.