hell ya! woo whoo! this is me dancing around in celebration and giving you a couple of internet hugs.
gerards whole inner-monolouge when he was coming to the conclusion he loved her was so good. i loved the line where he said she took his breath away then you incorporated it back into the story again at the end.
i always thought gerard and egan should have ended up together but im guessing it wont be smooth sailing since ive noticed (who hasnt) the countless arguments they are always having.
cant wait for more!
Author's response
And this is me dancing and hugging you back.
Gerard's inner monologue was experimental. I don't usually do things from anyone else's point of view but Egan's. I'm glad you liked it.
Oh, fights? More like lover's quarrel's. Psh. No, actually, they do fight quite alot, you're right, but it's their dynamics. It's kind of how they hang out. But there is no guarantee that everything will be cake for them.
I will update soon.