I'm in the office right now reading this, and I'm trying to think up of a smart, deep comment, complimenting you on how so wonderfully you wrote this chapter.....but I'm blank. Work has turned my brain to mush, but not so bad that I can't fully enjoy this.
Because I fully enjoyed this. I want to scream like a fan girl. GOSH. He loves her. She loves him. I love you. =D
(Here's 1% of that smart comment: I love how you wrote her reaction when he confessed. That was so powerful, I literally held my breath when I read it).
Author's response
Reading this has made me all giggly. I feel very bubbly and girly right now. I love compliments.
And I love you too!
You liked that? Good. I was trying to figure out for a very long time how she would react should he come out and say to her "Hey, I love you" or something. So it is fabulous that you liked it.
Gerard held his breath too :]