Looks like I'm gonna be the first to review again GRIN
Thanks for reposting the rest of the chapter; and it worked much better this time around.
While I'll be sorry to see you take your leave from fanfiction; I hope you come back and tell us some more stories.
BTW: thanks for the shout out at the end of the chapter! Glad my reviews are at least a little helpful to you.
red
Author's response
Holy crap, we've got a winner! Fifty points to Red's house for the fastest review on record.
I'm glad you liked the story and I very much appreciate all your reviews.
RJ rules!
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