i love how this chapter was almost entirely dialouge. like you said their relationship does seem to move fast. i would love to see a "juno" pregnancy but i dont think they have to get married. i am sooooo late now so i better get going but keep it up.
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I loved 'Juno'. That movie got me started on my current baby kick. Plus, no one ever has anyone have a baby in their FanFics. It's dissappointing.
Yeah, you see alot of action and surrounding and descriptions and inner monologues, but I figured it was time for dialogue.