(#) brad 2008-05-02
Enjoying this story; I like your style, with the bits and pieces of humour tossed in. Like this:
-- "Are you planning to murder your wives already, Lord Potter-Blackbeard?" Luna asked. --
I like your Luna too :-)
I'm worried about the increasing corruption of Harry's link to Voldemort ... it looks like the 'cleansing/purifying' effect of the solstice ritual is fading. Oh dear.