Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) shysmile 2008-05-03

this chapter was once again amazing! i dont know what im going to do when you actually write a bad chapter. it is going to have to happen sometime and when it does i might just go into shock.

i think its funny how calmly they talk about marriage and having a baby. at this rate the proposal will be very anticlimatic. if there is a proposal... their relationship is kind of confusing but i think that is why i love this story so much. it is just like a real relationship.

bring on the family! i cant wait for egan to meet all the family and band members.

Author's response

You say 'when', I say 'have'. But you all seem to stick with me through the not so great chapters. Thank you so much.

Yeah, that is a downside. Shold she say yes, it's not going to be like the night he told her he loved her. It'll just be like, Okay, whatevs. Let's go out to eat tonight, I don't feel like cooking.