wowee =]
This was really good =]
I loved how you started a few lines with the same word and then a short sentence, it made a powerful effect =]
Well done =]
Author's response
thankyouthankyouthankyou. for r&r, and simply being nice.
i originally didnt know what i was writing, so i just used what came into my head randomly, and the repition seemed to work.
so ty. glad you like.