Review for Fences [1/1]

Fences [1/1]

(#) inkvent 2008-05-04

wowee =]

This was really good =]

I loved how you started a few lines with the same word and then a short sentence, it made a powerful effect =]

Well done =]

Author's response

thankyouthankyouthankyou. for r&r, and simply being nice.

i originally didnt know what i was writing, so i just used what came into my head randomly, and the repition seemed to work.

so ty. glad you like.