Review for First Date

First Date

(#) RockettQueeen 2008-05-04

aww i'm glad iz is gunna get everything off his chest! it'll give him a clean break :) brilliant writing once again, you really know how to capture the moment and suck the reader into the story! awesome!

Author's response

Thank you very much! And I'm trying to show that Axl isn't really a monster, just misunderstood and very misguided. :)