Omigawsh that was AMAZING!
I totally fitted with the lyrics of the song. It really made sense! Clever.
-Emily
Author's response
thankeeee.
i tried to get it to make sense as much as possible, so i hope it worked. iunno. depends on whos reading.
thanks for the r&r. and for generally being nice. makes me happy to see people do actually review occasionally... ive had a total of three reviews for this chapter, even though theres been over 80 views in two days.
sorry to rant here, but REVIEW PEOPLE! tell me what you think is good, what you think is not completely working and tell me how i could change what i do to make it better. i like the lj reviewers more. 'cause they actually review.
so there.
haha come on, you know im right. stop being lazy and TALK TO ME.