Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Dragen 2008-05-06

Another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the great work mate.

I love the talk between Amelia and Severus, very inlighting.

I like that Justin brought Luna to meet his parents, very nice. I like the talk about Magic and maths and physics. :D

Poor Ron, because how Dumblefuck used him he is now dead. :(

I hope you'll update soon, as I would like to see what happens next, oh if you got the time I would like for you to read Harry Potter and the Slaves as I would like to her what you think of it.

Author's response

The next (and final) chapter is about half done...