FicWad

Er.. something feels off about this chapter. First was how the stairs disappear, and the students fallen onto empty air, to be crushed by the reappearing stairs, rather than falling to their death from the height. Unless those crushed to death were actually hanging for dear life along the side, with no one helping to pull them up.

2nd, no matter how strong Harry is and how much gold he waved under the goblins' nose, shouldn't the headmaster have a greater control over the castle?

One last bit, not so much regarding the chapter alone, is that it seem this will be a luna/harry fic. Was hoping for a Harry/Hermione >.< or even a harem, but guess i just have to bear with those parts that i dun like.

Overall, a nice story, though this chapter was a little different, with all the poor innocents as victims, rather than the wrongdoers getting their come uppance only.