(#) Cobra 2008-05-09
Oh so you're using the "Why don't you write something and see how that turns out." standard reply.
Let me assure you that you don't have to be a write to review stories.
I like independed!smart!super!Harry but there's a limit in everything, if you go overboard you'll end up in plothole hell and you're heading straight for it.
I'm sorry I'm not one of these other people that will tell you how great your story is and that you should super Harry a bit more up just for good mesure.
Author's response
So please, tell me how I'm overpowering him. And what, pray tell, is this scientific magic crap that you were going on about in your first post.