Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) lycus 2008-05-15

Thanks for the update, it was great. but something was bothering me so I read the whole story again and that is when it hit me. Daphnes father, he was so desperate to pair up his daughter with a light sided family that he put in those clauses in her contract and made her pose for nude pictures. so if he planed that whose to say that he didn't have back up plans if harry said no to the contract, and even if daphne is an adult she still has to obey her head of house.

Author's response

- And thus my next major plot point is discovered before I use it...

- Curses!