Nicely done!
The bit with Tonks was great fun, especially Winky alphabetising her porn.
I liked the scene in the dungeons quite a lot as well. The way you're taking Draco is interesting--not repentent, maybe, but growing up and becoming less of a git, even if he is a drunk.
What, no playing with Dumbles' head scene? ;-)
Well, I'm sure you're just giving it a respite in order to build up for the next big one.
Author's response
- Thank you.
- Tonks is fun. And you just know she has some nasty porn.
- If Daphne is going to deal with Harry's world, then he needs to deal with hers.
- Nah, don't want to do that too much.