(#) AnnF 2006-08-06
wow you killed Seamus twice.
"Their were some that died from Harry and Draco's friends, Sirius, Arthur, Ginny, Percy, Seamus, Professor McGonagall, Professor Trelawney and Cho."
Should be
There
But the beginning of the sentence should be changed, and you should probably change battle to war, if you are having OtP be where Sirius died. And you don't list any of Draco's friends...