This story is f*ckn’ funny! Absolutely love the way you broke it up into different parts but still keep some things the same like Brendon and Ryan’s “relationship” the way you used different types of rain like spring rain, thunder storms, and early morning rain that was awesome. The fact that you used Jon was original in its self no one does that including me. I believe your writing is so good because it’s so realistic, I could actually imagine the guys being like this doing and saying these things and I don’t know them. That’s how realistic the story you paint is. Even though the entire story is incredible it’s the end of the last part that I fancy the most.
And suddenly, all his fears and worries disappeared and there was no place in the world Jon would have rather been than right next to his best friends on a couch in a cabin in the middle of nowhere.
Maybe Jon Walker didn't really love life more when the rain fell. He simply knew that when it came, his friends would always be there to help him forget it.
This is just genies no other way to put it.