I teared up a bit in the end, it was so emotional :'( But actually I have faith in Frank to be able to save Gerard, and I don't have faith in much... Gahh, the image of a sobbing, t-shirt-clutching Gerard just won't leave me now - you're so powerful at reflecting emotions. And I think that's one of the most important things that makes you a great writer.
And of course one of the other things that makes you a great writer is lines like this one: "Quite contrarily, he ended up sounding whiny, like Spiderman" hehe =) I remember that interview thing with Frank, Gerard and Bob when Frank says he doesn't like Spiderman because he's too whiny. What you did is a perfect detail-catch, in my opinion. And it's amazing =D
So, did I make myself perfectly clear that you definitely should keep writing? And not only this story but anything else too, you're simply too good at it. Even if you say that the plot and the quality of the chapters are gonna heve to be sacrificed, I don't believe you could come up with something we'll read and not like.
And of course, have fun with your Les Paul!!! I've always wanted one but I've got an Ibanez RG right now... I'll have a Les Paul one day :)
Ooo, and I'm the default winner, wow! I wasn't expecting that... I'd actually thought the song would be a The Used song but I guess I'm just not that good at catching their lyrics in text, huh? So now, I get to tell you something to write about. Hmm, let me think. But you know, my request might even turn out to be a Gerard-Frank-Bert threesome :P That would be interesting... and hot.
You just saw how much I talk and talk and talk so I'm shutting up, now. You try to write another chapter. I'll think about the one-shot, hehe ;)
Author's response
haha goddamn it, I LOVE the Spiderman interview! It's just my favorite interview because I totally agree with Frankie. I hate Spiderman. So much. so I thought I might put that in there.
Thank yoou for all your nice compliments, I feel very special. And I kinda liked this chapter so I'm a little more motivated to go on.
And a threesome? Ohmegawd. I've wanted to write one but I dunno if I could pull it off. But knowing you, you probably think I can. Oh, and lemme know, do I have to write a sex scene? It might be a bad idea to ask me...I'm not too good at those...
You can email me if you want...instead of communicating through this thingie cause it's annoying.
xdrinkanddancex@gmail.com
But not if you're one of those privacy-obsessed people. don't email me in that case, I don't want you to feel all stalked.