Review for Elementary Calculations

Elementary Calculations

(#) TheUnicorn 2008-05-20

The scene with Petunia makes no sense. What do the Dursleys have that makes living with them preferable to some foster home? Why does Harry attempt to blackmail Petunia rather then simply reporting the Dursleys?

I did like your descriptions of Harry developing his powers although I think you had him succeed too quickly.

The Unicorn