Great new story; I'm really liking the individualized takes that so many authors are taking on the "Harry's memories and power's sent back in time" story. Your's, with the integration of The Fates, is very interesting and provides a new perspective on how the magic of the universe functions-- in many other stories, Harry/Hermione/Luna (Luna's mom, in one case) etc usually perform some necromatic ritual to do the deed. Verry interesting; I look forward to the upcoming chaps. Hopefully you'll find some inspiration and they will come about sooner, rather than later ;)
Keep the spacing too, please.
Jdailey