(#) DJ32 2008-05-24
Since you said you knew it was short that is fine. But you should have told us what he is even if not who he is. For example is he a Wizard, Vamp, Wolf, Mugggle Etc. I stll think this was a good job for a first time and hope to see more soon thanks for writting. This is just what I think and hope it helps down the road.