(#) Vanir 2008-05-24
Thanks.
His sub-surface hiding game seems successful for now, and Ollivander is a great character to play with. It looks like Harry was determined to stay clear of the magical world, but was pulled back in by his timely escape to just the right place. Would he avoid the long time friend as well? Will he even accept Hedwig? Am i looking forward to the next chapter? Hm? You think?
Vanir
Author's response
Thank you! I'm letting the next chapter stew around in the whirling dervish that I like to call my mind. I want the action to pick up again for a bit in the next chapter or so. In doing that, I want to keep it within the story line I have roughed out also. One thing I don;t like is conflict thrown in "to look like we are doing something." :)