The story continues to be good, but this last chapter concerns me. It reminds me too much of "Unsung Hero", in that Harry is dating a girl, she claims to love him, goes home for Christmas, and then does a 180 and breaks up with him. That story then dragged out that break up for over half the story, and had a terrible ending. So I'm hoping this is not like that story, and that this Daphne situation is resolved quickly.
Author's response
- I'm not familiar with "Unsung Hero" A movie?
- The story is winding down, but I don't know how terrible it is...