Looks like Harry has a little seer blood in him since he anticipated things falling apart. Can't say I understand how he could give up so easily, and I doubt Daphne wrote the note of her normal free will.
I have to say, I'm going to be most displeased with you if Daphne ends up under some potion/compulsion with someone else, as you did to Hermione in 'Acts' (attempts to mimic Harry Potter glare). It would be best for your health if she was returned to him unharmed.. (puts some extra ice into the glare). :)
It's good to see that Harry has optons if Daphne doesn't work out, though I can't see this becoming a Harry/multiple fic given Daphne's original 'I don't share' comments. You've certainly stirred the pot a little by having her invite Tracey after the concert, but I think that was just teasing. Still, I'm not going to complain if you add Luna, Tonks, &/or Susan to the mix.. Looks like Hermione is sorted with Justin, else I'd include her as well.
Good story Clell, and I like the way it's gone so far. I kinda hope you've got the 'gotta include some sexual abuse/manipulation' out of your system already with Ron's treatment of Hermione. I hope there isn't any more to come..
Author's response
- Not that much seer blood. Given Harry's life, predicting that everything would go to crap is a lot like predicting that it will get dark at night...
- No potions...
- It won't be a multi. The Daphne/Tracey conversation was just teasing
- No more sexual abuse (unless both parties agree before hand and have a safety word) I promise.