nice one, although i remember two storys here at ficwad which are also HP/DMC Xovers. they are at least on hold, but u might wanna look into them to prevent someone complaining about plagiarsm. (i forgot the details about them ^^ so thats just a warning)
other than a nice plot, finally someone who doesn't need as many proofreaders as there are letters in the alphabet.
hope 2 see more soon.