To all y'all complaining that Harry's meek acceptance of the "Dear John" letter, go back and reread the last section of the last chapter. Harry's been expecting something like this to happen. It always does.
Yes, it's obvious the letter was forced. I'm waiting for Tracey & Hermione to have a "pull your head out Potter" intervention session. I'm also waiting for Harry to sit down with the goblins and ruin Daddy Greengrass in the worst possible way...
Author's response
- Yeah, I telegraphed that pretty good didn't I? In reflection, we do some pretty horrible things to Harry in fan fiction, don't we?
- The Daphne situation comes to a head next chapter, though not necessarily to a resolution