Review for Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts

(#) jsdailey 2008-05-25

I was surprised at how Harry reacted to what Remus did. To me, it seems like all that Remus was guilty of was trusting Dumbledore to do the right thing with the information at hand. He revealed everything to the trio but then they were obliviated... hmm. I hope there's some reconciliation there... Otherwise, a great chapter. I've never liked Daphne as a character, but you've done a great job making her real. Obvi, the letter was forced by her father... but where will that lead? Perhaps that situation will lead to him fighting to get her back or maybe moving on to Luna? I can't wait to find out.

jdailey