Enjoyed a non-crazy Bella and her change of heart with Harry, as well as seeing a smart strong Harry. Dumbledore though it makes you wonder--what is up not only with Snape but Dung. Talk about a security risk! Why not just tie Snape up and use veritaserum on him? Surely they could have blackmailed Dumbledore into that, if nothing else. After all this man potential murdered Harry's father and he's in a school full of children and will be teaching Harry. I wouldn't have walked into that school without it. Can't wait for him to meet all the kids, and to see a difference Neville.
Author's response
Even in extremely pro-Dumbledore fanfics, he won't hear a word against Snape. Dumbledore is where the phrase "benefit of the doubt" comes from, believe me. Besides, conflict is fun.
Thanks for reviewing.