Wow...great story so far. I like how you depicted Bert. I find it a bit weird about the Bert/Quinn thing, just because. But undeniably, you are an excellent writer. Keep up the good work. I'll read, but I can't promise to review.
-Robbie
Author's response
Uhm...thanks. Well, half thanks and half, why-do-you-find-the-Bert/Quinn-thing-weird?