Are you serious?
This is too good to be real. In fact, good is such a understatement. It's brilliant, it's fantabulous, it's- it's, Oh good Lord, I've run out of words.
The build-up was executed so well, it was ridiculous. The thoughts running through Brendon's head were so realistic, it was scary. It was like you put yourself through that situation and then wrote everything down. THAT'S how clear cut and picture perfect that was.
There were a few parts some people might call cliche, but you carried them off really well and produced one fucking amazing story.
This is why I love you.
You are my new internet best friend. No, you cannot argue on that fact.
Savvy?
Author's response
Thank you oh-so very much.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I posted this, I thought it wasn't very good, but by the amount of feedback I received from this, I was mistaken.
I'm also glad that I carried off cliche parts in my story well.
INTERNET BEST FRIENDS TO THE CORE!
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