Hey ^^
Well i just found your story today, and just finished reading it. I think the story is pretty interesting. I feel really sorry for Frankie, what a shitty life!!
Anyways, hopefully Gee will help him out.
If you don't mind one tiny criticism... i think it would be better to have the story in one point of view. Changing from one character's point of view to another's is confusing sometimes. It seems more professional to just do it from one point of view, ya know? But thats my opinion, of course ^^
Anyways, I'll be looking for the next chapter! Update soon, if you can! xD
This time you've gotten a lot of reviews, yay! ^^
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